Fallen
when the breeze is just right,when the moon shines on my skin,I feel your touch linger on my body,I feel your breath on my neck,and again together, we are one,I could cry for a million years,just to...
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sigh.. I felt this Jessica.. really did. This is touchingly beautiful. I really enjoyed this. Beautifully written. ~Mystic~~"Mommy told me something, A little kid should know, It's all about the...
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Thank you a lot, glad you liked this JessicaIt's not easy to hide, all this damage inside, and I'll carry it with me until I'm not alive...when you look at my face, does it seem just as ugly to you......
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jess ... this is really beautiful ... you've crafted wonderful images and such a depth of emotion in this piece ... from the joy of togetherness to the despair of a shattered heart ... and a great...
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Glad you liked this, I threw away form, etc and just handed the heart a pen and this is what became of it... thanks girl, you mean a lot to me! hugs!JessicaIt's not easy to hide, all this damage...
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Jessica,I absolutely loved this...with wonderful imagery, you've created a beautiful scene and a peaceful tone... there is so much emotion in this that it is almost overwhelming.... and the ending is...
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Wow! This is truly awesome! I'm in awe.This is ultimately a beautiful poem in every way, it just really through me for a curve with the powerful, unexpected ending. I was just sort of like in a dream...
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Wow, you guys are making me blush...I'm glad you liked this! heh, nice way to start off my day with such sweet comments!JessicaIt's not easy to hide, all this damage inside, and I'll carry it with me...
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